Posted on 12. Nov, 2010 by admin in Features, Multimedia, Slideshows, Spotlight
By Mattie Stevens and Aly Gordon
Tags: arlingtonian, burgers dogs and fries, Giant Eagle, journalism, kingsdale, lunch, Market District, new, orange leaf, upper arlington
15. Nov, 2010
You had a very nice introduction and conclusion. Your asking of a question in the introduction guided the flow of your story line, proceeding into the body of your slideshow story. And in the ending, the question was a nice way to wrap it up. Your content and organization was very interesting, as well as your story development. By choosing three different restaurants, it allows you to give short brief “stories” for each which makes it more interesting. Your images were clear and the audio was done very well because it sparked interest in continuing to watch the slideshow. The captions could have been in a little bit more journalistic tone, but overall it was very well done. Nice job!
I really liked your opening and closing because you question really showed how the time of day when choosing where to go for lunch is continuous and will happen each day. I thought your subtopics were very clear and you did a good job balancing the amount of information you had on each resturaunt. Your interviews were very easy to hear. Maybe it would’ve been nice to hear an interview from some one different than a student.
I really liked this slideshow! You introduced your interviewees very well and you had very appropriate pictures! You can clearly tell where your sub-topics begin and start. The students had good feedback and comments on the restaurants and helped the story flow better.
16. Nov, 2010
I really like this! Your introduction and conclusion were very attention getting and helped the story. I also thought that your pictures complimented your audio well and the interviews you had were very helpful for more information! Good job!
I really enjoyed your slideshow! it gives a great overview of everything that is avaible for lunch in Kingsdale. Your introduction and conclution were helpful and grabbed my attention by asking a question. It flowed really well and the pictures complimented the audio well. I think you did a great job!
17. Nov, 2010
Good slideshow! You had a good introduction and conclusion which let people know what your slideshow was about. In addition you had good information about the restaurants you talked about and had good pictures and interviews for each place. Overall the slideshow flowed well.
06. Dec, 2011
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